Writing Competition The MHXmas Miracle

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  1. Mmaster12345

    Mmaster12345 New Member
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    This is my entry into the MHXmas writing competition!
    It follows the Shakespearean Sonnet format, and if you don't know how that works, the basic rules are below. I am open to any feedback of any sort!

    Have a Merry MHXmas everyone!
    - Mmaster12345

    See this link for the rules on Shakespearean sonnets, and how to write one: http://www.dummies.com/education/language-arts/poetry/writing-a-sonnet/

    The MHXmas Miracle

    It was a golden time for all alike,
    The square moon dazzling with its blazing light.
    With lobbies grand and staff all dressed dreamlike,
    The MHXmas spirit filled the night.

    To one specific soul we take our view,
    A soul who'd dance and prance with waves of glee.
    Their pixel Christmas tree a festive hue,
    They'd just opened their shiny Winter Key!

    But unbeknown to player, user, friend,
    This person suffered from a sad syndrome.
    A hellish hell was lived unto no end,
    Yet MineHeroes would always act as home.

    So now this soul has will to fight, to pray,
    So Minecraft helped him live another day.
     
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  2. PattyCakes

    PattyCakes Well-Known Member
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    Very nice, I enjoyed reading the sonnet! good luck in the competition, best of luck!
     
  3. VersaceDM

    VersaceDM Well-Known Member
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    This poem or sonnet was very nice to read. I wish you the best of luck in the writing competition :D
     

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