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Very nice, I enjoyed reading the sonnet! good luck in the competition, best of luck!
Ooooh I got mentioned! very nice! good luck arteezy!
OOooh i enjoyed this story, I like how you approached the task! good luck in the competition!
Bring a little christmas to the story! Yeah it's a little dark as Norwo said however :o All in all, good luck!
Very creative, good luck in the competition, the competition is definitely ramping up
Not entirely sure what the story is about, do you want to give it another go? try to introduce a few more characters :P
Ooooh, I really enjoyed the story! You're a good writer :o Thanks for the submission! best of luck to you!
As Norwo said it's got to be Mineheroes related, regardless good luck!
Merry Christmas! good luck in the contest. Your submission was nice and short :D
Need to get the Christmas spirit into your story! regardless thanks for the submission!
Nice little poem, short and sweet. Thanks for the submission! :D
Perhaps you could approach the competition more seriously, Try submitting an actual story please.
Haha! I like the humour in the story, it was well crafted. Can't wait to see how well this story fares, good luck in the competition!
Wow, great work Starry! It was really inspiring, the way you took something negative and sad and brought out hope in it, along with the...
Nice story! I like the way it incorporated Mineheroes into the story! good luck in the contest.
Nice story! I like the way it's written! good luck in the contest.
Best of luck to you! thanks for the submission :)
Thanks for the submission, the bad ending was a little too dark for my liking :o
Actually Clever! Good luck in the contest!